Making the Second Draft
Go back to the earlier lessons about comics.
Use your partner’s feedback and what you’ve learned about making comics to do a new version of your story.
Think about:
- Can you use shapes to make your characters more clear?
- Can you make your characters’ emotions more clear?
- Can you use angle and distance to make the comic more clear or more interesting?
- Can you use panel layout to make the comic more clear or more interesting?
- Can you guide the reader’s eye more effectively?
- Can you use these to make the story more clear or more effective?
When you’ve decided what to change, you can make a new version of your comic.