Lesson: Second Draft
In this lesson, students return to one of the comicsthey made, then draw on peer feedback and personal reflection to develop a second draft.
Grade range: 4-6
Teacher Material: https://textbook.mediasmarts.ca/discoveringstudent/chapter/reflecting-on-feedback/
Student Material: https://textbook.mediasmarts.ca/discovering/chapter/toy-story-black-friday/
Time Frame
One class period (45-60 minutes) | Two or three class periods (90-120 minutes) | Extended Unit | ||
Activities | Reflecting on Feedback
Making the Second Draft |
Reflecting on Feedback Sharing and Peer Feedback Making the Second Draft
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Reflecting on Feedback Sharing and Peer Feedback Making the Second Draft Showcasing the Second Draft
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Preparation:
- Make sure that you are able to show the embedded videos and students are able to access the interactive activities.
Learning Outcomes
Big ideas/key concepts: Students will understand that…
Media are constructions:
- Media works are crafted through deliberate choices that shape the final product
Each medium has a unique aesthetic form:
- Different media employ specific techniques (“rules of notice”) to guide attention and convey meaning
Key questions:
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How can we apply feedback and new knowledge to enhance our comics?
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How can we effectively leverage the unique aspects of comics to communicate our ideas?
Essential knowledge: Students will know…
- Reading media: Specific techniques and conventions of comics, such as angle and distance, panel layout, and guiding the eye
- Making and remixing:The importance of revision in the writing process; strategies for incorporating feedback to improve their work
Performance tasks: Students will be able to…
- Analyze teacher feedback and identify areas for improvement in their comics.
- Apply their understanding of comics techniques to revise their comics, enhancing their clarity, impact, and effectiveness.
- Justify their revisions based on the feedback received and their expanded knowledge of comics.
Curriculum Connections
Strand A: Literacy Connections and Applications
A1 Transferable Skills
A1.1 Receptive and Expressive Communication
explain how transferable skills can be used to support communication in various cultural, social, linguistic, and domain-specific contexts, and apply them when reading, listening to, viewing, and creating texts of various forms
A1.2 Student Agency and Engagement
evaluate and explain how transferable skills help them express their voice, be engaged in their learning, and plan the next steps to develop their capabilities and potential
A2 Digital Media Literacy
A2.4 Forms, Conventions, and Techniques
demonstrate an understanding of the forms, conventions, and techniques of digital and media texts, consider the impact on the audience, and apply this understanding when analyzing and creating texts
A2.5 Media, Audience and Production
demonstrate an understanding of the interrelationships between the form, message, and context of texts, the intended audience, and the purpose for production
Strand D: Composition: Expressing Ideas and Creating Texts
D1. Developing Ideas and Organizing Content
D1.1 Purpose and Audience
identify the topic, purpose, and audience for various texts they plan to create, and explain why the chosen text form, genre, and medium suit the purpose and audience, and how they will help communicate the intended meaning
D1.2 Developing Ideas
generate and develop ideas and details about various topics, such as topics related to diversity, equity, and inclusion and to other subject areas, using a variety of strategies, and drawing on various resources, including their own lived experiences
D1.4 Organizing Content
Grades 4-5: select and classify ideas and collected information, using appropriate strategies and tools, and sequence content, taking into account the chosen text form, genre, and medium
Grade 6: classify and sequence ideas and collected information, using appropriate strategies and tools, and identify and organize relevant content, taking into account the chosen text form, genre, and medium
D1.5 Reflecting on Learning
Grades 4-5: describe the strategies and tools that helped them develop ideas and organize content for texts of the chosen forms, genres, and media, and explain how they helped them improve as a text creator
Grade 6: explain and compare how the strategies and tools used helped them develop ideas and organize content for texts of the chosen forms, genres, and media, and how they helped them improve as a text creator
D2. Creating Texts
D2.1 Producing Drafts
Grades 4-5: draft texts of various forms and genres, including narrative, persuasive, and informational texts, using a variety of media, tools, and strategies
Grade 6: draft complex texts of various forms and genres, including narrative, expository, and informational texts, using a variety of media, tools, and strategies
D2.3 Voice
establish a personal voice in their texts, using varied language and elements of style to express their thoughts, feelings, and opinions about a topic, and using a tone appropriate to the form and genre
D2.5 Revision
Grades 4-5: make revisions to the content of draft texts and to elements of style, such as word choice, and add or delete sentences, to improve clarity, focus, and coherence, seeking feedback
Grade 6: make revisions to the content, elements of style, patterns, and features of draft texts, and add and delete sentences to improve clarity, focus, and coherence, using various strategies and seeking and selectively
D2.6 Editing and Proofreading
Grades 4-5: edit draft texts to improve accuracy and style, checking for errors in spelling, punctuation, grammar, and format; use a word processor to edit texts
Grade 6: edit draft texts to improve accuracy and style, checking for errors in spelling, punctuation, grammar, and format; edit digital texts using word-processing software, including spell- and grammar-checkers
D3 Publishing, Presenting, and Reflecting
D3.1 Producing Final Texts
Grade 4: produce final texts using a variety of techniques and tools, including simple digital design and production tools, to achieve the intended effect
Grade 5: produce final texts using a variety of techniques and tools, including digital design and production tools, to achieve the intended effect
Grade 6: produce final texts, selecting a variety of suitable techniques and tools, including digital design and production tools, to achieve the intended effect
D3.2 Publishing and Presenting Texts
Grades 4-5: publish and present texts they have created, using selected media and tools, and explain how each helped them communicate their intended message
Grade 6: publish and present texts they have created, using selected media and tools, and analyze how their choices helped them communicate their intended message
D3.3 Reflecting on Learning
Grade 4: describe various strategies that helped them present and communicate their message when publishing and presenting texts, and explain how they helped them improve as a text creator
Grade 5: describe various strategies and tools that helped them communicate their intended message when publishing and presenting texts, and suggest steps for future improvement as a text creator
Grade 6: compare how various strategies and tools helped them communicate their intended message when publishing and presenting texts, and suggest future steps for improvement as a text creator