{"id":801,"date":"2024-11-21T15:35:05","date_gmt":"2024-11-21T15:35:05","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/textbook.mediasmarts.ca\/navigatingstudent\/chapter\/creating-the-second-draft\/"},"modified":"2025-08-06T20:31:43","modified_gmt":"2025-08-06T20:31:43","slug":"creating-the-second-draft","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/textbook.mediasmarts.ca\/navigatingstudent\/chapter\/creating-the-second-draft\/","title":{"raw":"Creating the Second Draft","rendered":"Creating the Second Draft"},"content":{"raw":"<span class=\"ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5056\">Go back to the earlier lessons on digital storytelling\u00a0 that are most relevant to the feedback you received. For example, if you received feedback on your use of camera angles, review the lesson <a href=\"https:\/\/textbook.mediasmarts.ca\/navigatingstudent\/chapter\/the-camera-frame\/\">Rules of Notice<\/a>.\r\n<\/span>\r\n<div data-start-index=\"5299\"><\/div>\r\n<div class=\"paragraph normal ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5299\"><span class=\"ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5299\">Use your feedback and your renewed understanding of digital storytelling techniques, as well as any insights you might have had on the\u00a0 to revise your story.<\/span><\/div>\r\n<div data-start-index=\"5404\"><\/div>\r\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--key-takeaways\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\r\n<div class=\"paragraph normal ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5404\"><span class=\"bold ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5404\">Think about:<\/span><\/div>\r\n<\/header>\r\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li data-start-index=\"5404\"><span class=\"ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5413\">How can you make your story clearer and more engaging?<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"paragraph normal ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5467\"><span class=\"ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5467\">Can you use digital storytelling techniques to make your story more clear or more effective?<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"paragraph normal ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5570\"><span class=\"ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5570\">How can you improve the pacing or flow of your story?<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li class=\"paragraph normal ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5623\"><span class=\"ng-star-inserted\" data-start-index=\"5623\">Are there any visuals you can add or change to make your story more effective?<\/span><\/li>\r\n \t<li data-start-index=\"5623\">Are there changes to the narration or the music that would make your story more effective?<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<div data-start-index=\"5623\"><\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\nYou can download a new copy of the <a href=\"https:\/\/drive.google.com\/file\/d\/1iBf8BO9Ih4EdREDg6xIS5yGJfUrg2nx8\/view?usp=sharing\">Story Table handout<\/a> to plan your changes.\r\n\r\nWhen you've decided what to change, you can review the chapter on the <a href=\"https:\/\/textbook.mediasmarts.ca\/navigatingstudent\/chapter\/digital-story-maker\/\">Digital Story Maker<\/a> if necessary. 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